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"Branding"
Veröffentlicht am 09. Juli 2009, 2 Seiten
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Wie die Zeit doch vergeht... Ich bin nun schon eine Weile in Deutschland und habe mich eingelebt. Trotz allem musste ich auch hier schon schlechte Erfahrungen sammeln. Dadurch stehe ich Menschen distanziert gegenüber und lasse nur die Wenigsten nah an mich heran. Müsst ihr mehr wissen? Dann fragt mich einfach! Ihr werdet dazu ja einen Weg finden und sicherlich kreativ genug sein, oder? ;) Greetz, Vivi
Branding

Branding

The heat is rising to extremes
Nothing is really what it seems
It's hurting but also feeling good
The wound smells like burned wood

Why am I doing this to myself?
Who is this man behind the shelf?
The one who wanted me to do this,
you probably know who he is.

Your beloved darling with angel eyes.
Once more you believed him one of his lies.
"It won't hurt, honey! It will feel good!"
But why do I feel like a piece of wood?

The tension is high and so I forgot,
the tools of steel are devlish hot.
There is only the sound of silent fizzling,
and at the end this star on my skin.
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BlackMinded
Wie die Zeit doch vergeht...
Ich bin nun schon eine Weile in Deutschland und habe mich eingelebt. Trotz allem musste ich auch hier schon schlechte Erfahrungen sammeln. Dadurch stehe ich Menschen distanziert gegenüber und lasse nur die Wenigsten nah an mich heran.

Müsst ihr mehr wissen? Dann fragt mich einfach! Ihr werdet dazu ja einen Weg finden und sicherlich kreativ genug sein, oder? ;)

Greetz,
Vivi

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BlackMinded Re: So it was true - Zitat: (Original von Luzifer am 12.07.2009 - 11:19 Uhr) Nobody should do a branding out of a \"advice\". It is something that should only be done for yourself. But the feelings...yes, the ones which let you do things for someone which are crazy as hell. But although the pain fuses with the heart together (physical and psychical) it also teaches us and makes us stronger for the future.
A falling star as a motive is a good metaphor for the duality of the feeling.

Your redskinned hellboy

You are really profound. :)
You are right about the motive and its duality. ;)
A devlish poet (kyrillian doesn't work here) you are. *smiles*
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Luzifer So it was true - Nobody should do a branding out of a "advice". It is something that should only be done for yourself. But the feelings...yes, the ones which let you do things for someone which are crazy as hell. But although the pain fuses with the heart together (physical and psychical) it also teaches us and makes us stronger for the future.
A falling star as a motive is a good metaphor for the duality of the feeling.

Your redskinned hellboy
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BlackMinded Re: Dear Vivi -
Zitat: (Original von LadyLy am 09.07.2009 - 12:56 Uhr) I'm truly shocked about this text. Like sastone I cannot figure out if this is true or just a lyrical expression of your feelings by now. But it seems you really hurt yourself that way. I think I could not take this. The tattoo I head hurt enough.

If it is a metaphor I know what you mean - Talking about a liar one believes in. And then it hurts, again and again.

Send you my best wishes.


Dear Elena!

You are shocked?
You don't have to be.
In the end it is just a kind of art, like a tattoo as you said. The deeper connection to the background of this is the true art of this text. The connection between physical and psychical pain. ;)

Twinkles to you,
Vivi
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BlackMinded Re: Erm.. -
Zitat: (Original von sastone am 09.07.2009 - 11:00 Uhr) Did you really do this to yourself?? I'm just asking because of the cover picture...

It can be understood like a simile, too. "Once more you believed him one of his lies". I understood the branding like another sign of cognition on ones heart... made by the fight of truth and lies.
People are way too often hurt by beloved ones... I guess this is one thing I must figure out still...


Dear Silvie!

Yes, I did this to myself. The picture is no fake.
But you have interpreted it aswell right. It is not only the pain I felt because of doing this. It is also the "burning" inside me because of the lies. You are smart to understand this. :)

Have a nice day!
Valentina
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LadyLy Dear Vivi - I'm truly shocked about this text. Like sastone I cannot figure out if this is true or just a lyrical expression of your feelings by now. But it seems you really hurt yourself that way. I think I could not take this. The tattoo I head hurt enough.

If it is a metaphor I know what you mean - Talking about a liar one believes in. And then it hurts, again and again.

Send you my best wishes.
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